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love poem- Love strikes,Love hurts

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Book Review by: krissypercay

Author : krissypercay
Published: September 06, 2007
I can still remember the day  i first saw you

And i'll never forget how you smile at me intently
The way you smile took the breath out of me
I'm so bewildered about how i feel that day 
Feels so rare the moment I first met you.
Everytime i'm on my own i wonder why
why you're in my thoughts all day and night
I can't help but to think of you every seconds
Feels like love collides and raptured my heart. 
Pursuaded by my mind to hypothesized that you
are Mr. Right.
The day you came to pass and sat by my side
I got no discretion but to unveil my luv outside
holding my hands, touching your face
If it's for real don't revive me from this dream 
'Cuz i want to be with you not only in my reveries.
The enchanting essence of twighlight lusters
as i sense the warmth of your touch, the gaze in your eyes
The smile in your lips are still clear on my head
All my grandiose illusions I made up in my mind
We're so far from truth but i could not see it at that time.
Assured me you love me, i thought it was true
You told me you care for me, i should have known it a lie
I wish i had believe that promises are made to be broken
Empty vows, how could you trick on me
I was just another toy and a game you came to play with.
I cried a river and bled hazardously
Feeling the tormenting pain, worst- I'm still breathing
Moment will soon fly and all things must come to end
Like the sand castles slowly being swept away by the riptide
Ana all was left are traces that will remind me of you.
But that's a damn good start for me to move and go on
without you in my life.
 
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